Summary & Response
Performance Inventory
M. Jufrianto (adapted from
Ch. Bauer-Ramazani's Response Performance
Inventory, 2013)
Name _________________
Primary Traits |
Performance Scale
1st draft (60% of assignment grade) |
Performance Scale
2nd draft (40% of assignment grade) |
1. TASK COMPLETION
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The assignment includes all required components of
the task.
- The assignment follows formatting
guidelines for layout (headings), spacing,
alignment, indentations, etc.
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2. INTRODUCTION
- The introduction includes a full in-text
citation (author, article, year)
- The introduction includes the topic.
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The text includes a summary sentence with the main
points of the original.
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The introduction includes a bridge to the response.
- The introduction includes a thesis statement with
all components (topic, controlling idea, aspects)
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3. TOPIC DEVELOPMENT/ ORGANIZATION
- The type of response is
clear (personal experience, application,
agree/disagree).
- The summary & response captures the main ideas of the
source (article).
- The summary & response includes topic
sentences with topic, controlling idea, aspect.
- The summary & response includes several supporting
points and shows
development of content and knowledge of subject
matter through effective use of topic-related
concepts to support argument; sophistication in
fluency of expression.
- The summary & response includes a
concluding sentence that restates the writer's
argument.
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4. WRITING:
Paraphrasing, vocabulary
- The summary & response paraphrases ideas
from the source effectively and appropriately.
- The summary & response shows a
broad and fluent range of vocabulary;
elaboration and detail achieved through full use of
topic-related terms.
- Vocabulary is
used
concisely and appropriately
(formal English); correct use of
word forms and word choice.
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5. WRITING: Discourse, Sentence Structure,
Mechanics
- The summary & response shows
full control (logical
coherence) and excellent use of
cohesive devices (key words, pronouns,
references, transitions, etc.); presentation of
ideas extremely clear and coherent.
- The summary & response
shows a full
range of sentence patterns (simple, compound,
complex), effectively used; error-free
sentence-level grammar.
- The summary & response shows
correct spelling,
capitalization, and punctuation.
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Score: ________/90 = ______ ________/90
=_____
Assignment grade: 1st draft @ 60%
= ________
+ 2nd draft @ 40% =
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Total grade: ________
Performance Rubric/Legend
1 |
Does not use target trait, or
writing is illegible or incomprehensible |
2 |
Use of trait is at a functional
level, sometimes appropriate use but often not, and lack
of control interferes with communication |
3 |
Use of trait is at a developmental
level, inconsistent or inappropriate use of trait, and level
of control sometimes interferes with communication |
4 |
Few major misuses of trait that
rarely interfere with communication but not yet at a
fluent level of control |
5 |
Automatic level of performance: few
misuses of trait; fluent level of control: meets
standard |
Comments:
© 2013
Christine Bauer-Ramazani, Saint Michael's
College. Last updated:
October 1, 2013 |