Response

Performance Inventory
Ch. Bauer-Ramazani

                         Name _________________                           

Primary Traits

Performance Scale

1st draft (60% of assignment grade)

Performance Scale

2nd draft (40% of assignment grade)

1.  TASK COMPLETION

  • The assignment includes all required components of the task.
  • The assignment follows formatting guidelines for layout (headings), spacing, alignment, indentations, etc.



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2.  INTRODUCTION

  • The introduction includes a full in-text citation (author, article, year)
  • The introduction includes a quotation or paraphrase from the source in correct format.
  • The response includes a thesis statement with all components (topic, controlling idea, aspects).


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3.  TOPIC DEVELOPMENT/ ORGANIZATION

  • The type of response is clear (personal experience, application, agree/disagree).
  • The response captures the main ideas of the source (article).
  • The response includes a topic sentence with topic, controlling idea, aspect.
  • The response includes several supporting points and shows development of content and knowledge of subject matter through effective use of topic-related concepts to support argument; sophistication in fluency of expression.
  • The response includes a concluding sentence that restates the writer's argument.

 

 

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4.  WRITING: Paraphrasing, vocabulary

  • The response paraphrases ideas from the source effectively and  appropriately.
  • The response shows a broad and fluent range of vocabulary; elaboration and detail achieved through full use of topic-related terms.
  • Vocabulary is used concisely and appropriately (formal English); correct use of word forms and word choice.

 

 


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5.  WRITING: Discourse, Sentence Structure, Mechanics

  • The response shows full control (logical coherence) and excellent use of cohesive devices (key words, pronouns, references, transitions, etc.); presentation of ideas extremely clear and coherent.
  • The response shows a full range of sentence patterns (simple, compound, complex), effectively used; error-free sentence-level grammar.
  • The response shows correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation.

 

 

 

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                                                              Score:        ________/85 = ______         ________/85 =_____

                                                                           Assignment grade:    1st draft @  60%  =  ________
                                                                                                        + 2nd draft @ 40%  =   ________

                                                       Total grade:    ________

Performance Rubric/Legend
 

1

Does not use target trait, or writing is illegible or incomprehensible

2

Use of trait is at a functional level, sometimes appropriate use but often not, and lack of control interferes with communication

3

Use of trait is at a developmental level, inconsistent or inappropriate use of trait, and level of control sometimes interferes with communication

4

Few major misuses of trait that rarely interfere with communication but not yet at a fluent level of control

5

Automatic level of performance: few misuses of trait; fluent level of control: meets standard

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