EN 103: Academic
English for Critical Thinking and Communication in Business
Prof. Ch. Bauer-Ramazani
Directions: Correct the errors marked in the following paragraph. The errors relate to tense, prepositions, articles, conjunctions, word choice and verb form.
Human Relations Skills
In our group, we
are very
open and honest to
each other; where there are
some different ways to do one thing, we
can always find a way to satisfy each
member. Our general manager, X, did a good job
on human relations skills; he always
sets a time for our
members meet in
library, which showed he is good
about
communication. We usually communicate
each other by phone; I would talk to X about the assignment we
are going to do, and we would decide a
time for our meeting. Then X will call Y,
and I will e-mail Z our plan. The only
problem we had in the beginning is Z didn’t have
phone in his home, so the only way to
connect him
is
e-mail, which we
cannot get
answer
imminently. However, after Z got a
cellular phone, this problem had
solved.
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© 2005: Christine Bauer-Ramazani; last updated: December 06, 2017